Imperfect

She

is

imperfection 

staring

back

at

me

yet

I

love

her

still....

 
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20 comments on “Imperfect

  1. You reached, grabbed our attention and drew us in on this one. I love that moment, when its not exactly words we read, but something else – empathy, a sudden thought, The dialogue up to ‘yet’ was delicious! When you read the words jump back and forth..then you think, who’s leading, who is following?

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