Haiku #24

We seek the Skyline
 Battling the raging tide
...Love be our compass
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8 comments on “Haiku #24

  1. You couldn’t get more meanings here – wonderful! I especially like haiku with movement and distance (as the one before even, on tiptoes). The imagery ere is also startingly clear – and that’s what you want from a haiku: startling.
    …fools that they be relying on love! heehee!

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